Wednesday, September 1, 2021
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Hi Oskar, please have another look at your post, your document hasn't embedded properly, I would really like to read it. If you are having trouble, your teachers can help.
ReplyDeleteHi Oskar, I have fixed the doc for you.
ReplyDeleteYou have found lots of facts out about the Earth's layers. Ka pai. Can you see if you can go back and add in some joining words to extend your sentences?
For example:
The outer core is the fourth layer.
It’s only 1.3 billion years old.
could be changed to
The outer core is the fourth layer and it is only 1.3 billion years old.
I am also wondering how Inge Lehmann found the outer core, maybe you could add that in too.